The Short and Long of It

Nola 2014 g copyWell, here we are in the final week of the ‘Write Life’ guest blog series, and what a great two months it’s been! Our last, but not least, guest blogger is Nola Passmore, co-founder of The Write Flourish, enthusiastic encourager, poet and devotional extraordinaire, a/professor in a past life, fan of fur-pals and general good gal. Today she’s sharing insights from her skillful writing repertoire, but don’t be surprised if she gets a bit ‘shorty’ on us along the way. 😉

 

My shorts have found themselves tucked away in lots of nooks and crannies. Before you get too alarmed, I’m talking about short written material – poetry, devotions, short fiction, true stories, and magazine articles. I’ve had some degree of success, with more than 140 pieces published. However, last year I decided to start a novel. How hard could it be? Two years and 34 000 words later, I’ve learned a thing or two.

1. Writing a novel is hard. I now have a greater respect for novelists and think twice before criticising them for the odd slow passage, convoluted sentence or inconsistency. After all, I had my hero stepping out of a car on one page and then had the car pulling into the kerb to let him out on the next.

2. Persistence is key. If I tire of a short story, it’s no big deal. I can toss it out or leave it in a drawer until inspiration strikes. But if I’m part way through a novel and give up, that’s a huge investment of time and effort. There’s no kudos for writing half a book. You have to keep going.

3. Pride is an ugly taskmaster. I feel I have a good story that could challenge people to stand against injustice. However, my pride’s also at stake. There’s a little voice in my head that says I won’t be a ‘real’ author until I’ve had a book published. It would also be downright embarrassing not to finish, given the number of people who know I’m writing a novel. I need to constantly check my motives to ensure I’m penning my blockbuster for the right reasons.

4. Shorts add up. Just because you need to do more research and sort out the next bit of the plot, it doesn’t mean you can’t add anything to your novel for four months. (Oops … yes, that was me. Back on track now). Remember that a book is made up of chapters, scenes, paragraphs and sentences. Each small piece adds to the whole and keeps the project puttering along.

5. Never underestimate the God Factor. There have been many times when I’ve thought, ‘Who am I trying to kid? I’m not a novelist. I don’t know what I’m doing. EEK!’ But then I remember that God put this story on my heart. When I’ve been unsure of the next plot turn or how to fix a literary glitch, it’s amazing how he just seems to pop a solution into my mind. Trust that if He prompts you to do something as crazy as writing a parallel narrative spanning four continents and two time periods, He’ll also give you the means to complete the task.

Writing a novel has certainly hurled me out of my comfort zone, but it’s been worth every minute. Now if you’ll excuse me, I have to decide whether my heroine gets blown to smithereens in the Halifax Explosion of 1917.

GodFactorCoverNola Passmore is a writer of shorts, a would-be novelist, and the originator of many a hare-brained scheme that she inflicts on family and friends. She loves exploring different facets of creativity and encouraging others to develop their God-given talents. She and her husband Tim have their own freelance writing and editing business called The Write Flourish. You can find her writing tips blog on their website: www.thewriteflourish.com.au

8 thoughts on “The Short and Long of It

    1. Thanks Michelle. I think it might be a while before I’m NaNoWriMoing with the rest of you, but there’s been considerable movement since the retreat 🙂

      1. You never know, Nola. You could be NoNoWriMoing us under the table before we know it! (NoNoWriMo being ‘Nola’s Novel Writing Month’ 🙂 ) And thanks for dragging … I mean … encouraging me along that shorts journey. It really is amazing where your shorts can lead you! 😉

  1. Thanks for your encouragement Anusha. I know what you mean about “the other urgent writings clamouring for attention”. I have a true story and a flash fiction story to enter by Wednesday this week, a blog to write for Thursday that I haven’t started, two 400-word devotions due 15 January and lots of other bits and pieces in there. But I love to still keep those short pieces rolling over. Just need to make sure the novel keeps rolling over too. Good luck with all of your pieces too Anusha. Let this year be one of publishing abundance 🙂

  2. Hi Nola

    Thanks for the chuckle and insights along the way. For me it’s been the opposite way around with my first piece written being a novel (though it and it’s companions are yet to be published). This year I’ve been trying my hand at short pieces and have found keeping the plot simple enough for a few thousand words a challenge. For Tied in Pink anthology (released 14 December) I wrote three stories before I could get one in cooee of the maximum word count of 5000. But I’ve enjoyed learning new skills and will be writing more shorts in the coming year. All the best with your novel.

    1. Thanks for that Jenny. It certainly takes a different skill set to move from short pieces to novels and vice versa. I’ve only had a few short stories published and find them challenging in different ways. It’s hard to get a good story arc in a limited word length, but it’s a good discipline. Just when you think you can’t possibly cut anything out, you can always find a way. I guess getting the scope right is part of the skill. The first few short stories I wrote had way too many ideas and I had to narrow the focus.
      I really liked your story “The Herbalist’s Daughter’. You managed to pack a lot into the word length. I’m trying to think of my novel as lots of little shorts broken into scenes. Makes it easier that way. Blessings 🙂

      1. Thanks Nola 🙂 Yes, trying to keep it simple is the challenge for me 🙂 And I think you are right that a novel is made up of a lot of connected shorter scenes and chapters 🙂

  3. Great post Nola. Just what I needed – since I am ‘sort of’ writing my first novel too – except that there are other urgent writings constantly clamouring my attention. Totally agree with all you’ve written. Thank you for spurring me on in my own novel writing. Well done on ‘The Write flourish’ and it’s exciting beginnings in 2014. All power to your pen my friend! Your thousands of shorts have shown us what you are capable of. So atta-girl Nola! :)You WILL DO IT! And do it excellently!

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